ORIGINAL REPORTS
Is the Evaluation of the Personal Statement a
Reliable Component of the General Surgery
Residency Application?
Bobbie Ann Adair White, MA,* Mark Sadoski, PhD,
†
Scott Thomas, MD,
‡
and
Mohsen Shabahang, PhD
§
*The Office of Faculty Development, Texas A&M Health Science Center, College of Medicine, Temple,
Texas;
†
The Office of Educational Development, Texas A&M Health Science Center, College of Medicine,
Bryan, Texas;
‡
Department of General Surgery, Scott & White Healthcare, Temple, Texas;
§
Department of
General Surgery, Geisinger Medical Center, Danville, Pennsylvania
BACKGROUND: Each year, fourth-year medical students
spend considerable time writing and rewriting their personal
statements. However, there is little evidence of what role the
personal statement plays in deciding which applicants will be
invited for an interview.
OBJECTIVE: To evaluate the inter-rater reliability of a surgical
selection committee’s ratings for both the personal statement
and the application summary parts of the residency application.
DESIGN: We completed a retrospective analysis of the 2007–
2008 Scott & White surgical residency application pool. From
a total pool of 174 residency applications, we selected 8 (5%)
applications randomly to be evaluated by 4 experienced mem-
bers of the selection committee. The 4 committee members
rated each personal statement on a 7-point scale, from “nega-
tive—would not invite for an interview” to “positive—will in-
vite for an interview.” They rated respective application sum-
maries separately on a similar 7-point scale. Committee
members also listed their top three reasons for assigning their
scores.
METHODS: Rating scores for the personal statements and the
applications were analyzed for inter-rater correlation. The qual-
itative data (ie, reasons for the scores) were reviewed to help the
investigators profile the reasons given for very positive and very
negative scores.
RESULTS: For the application summaries, the correlations be-
tween each pair of raters ranged from 0.79 to 0.94 with an
overall average of 0.88. For the personal statements, inter-rater
correlations ranged from -0.83 to 0.63 with an overall average
of -0.09.
CONCLUSION: These results demonstrate that the personal
statements lacked objective criteria for evaluation. (J Surg 69:
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Published by Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved.)
KEY WORDS: residency application, match, personal state-
ment, application criteria
COMPETENCIES: Interpersonal and Communication Skills,
Professionalism, Systems Based Practice
INTRODUCTION
Each year, fourth-year medical students spend considerable
time writing, rewriting, and seeking editorial advice about the
content of their personal statements. Students believe that the
quality of the personal statement may determine their chances
for a residency interview. Many medical schools provide a list of
“do’s” and “don’ts,” and some distribute guidelines for writing
the personal statement. But the personal statement is ultimately
personal, and evaluators are faced with varied styles, format,
and content.
It is difficult to measure objectively what makes a personal
statement a “good one,” although there have been attempts in
the literature to characterize it more objectively.
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Also poorly
understood is what role the personal statement plays in deciding
which applicants will be invited for an interview. The National
Resident Matching Program (NRMP) attempted to capture the
relative contributions of application components through their
2010 NRMP Program Director Survey
2
(for additional details
about their survey, see http://www.nrmp.org).
Sixty-eight percent of responding directors cited the personal
statement was a factor in interview selection. This percentage is
higher than that of grades in required clerkships (62%), the
Correspondence: Inquiries to Bobbie Ann Adair White, MA, The Office of Faculty Devel-
opment, Texas A&M Health Science Center, College of Medicine, 2401 South 31st Street,
Temple, TX 76508; fax: (254) 724-6810; e-mail: bawhite@medicine.tamhsc.edu
Presented in part at the Association of American Medical Colleges, Joint Student Affairs
and Careers in Medicine Professional Development Conference, June 11, 2011.
Journal of Surgical Education
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