Colloquium
Use of peer feedback to enhance elementary students’ writing
through blogging
Yu Liang Chen, Eric Zhi Feng Liu, Ru Chu Shih, Chin Tsung Wu and
Shyan Ming Yuan
Address for correspondence: Mr. Yu Liang Chen, Department of Computer Science, National Chiao Tung University,
1001 University Road, Hsinchu 300, Taiwan. Email: imklchen@gmail.com; Dr. Eric Zhi Feng Liu, Graduate
Institute of Learning & Instruction, National Central University, no. 300 Jung-da Road, Chung-Li City, Taoyuan
320, Taiwan. Email: totem@cc.ncu.edu.tw
Introduction
The learning process can be transformed from in-class teaching into learning outside the class-
room due to the emergence of new networking tools. In this study, peer feedback was used to
enhance elementary students’ writing through employing a brand new networking environ-
ment: the blog Web 2.0 (O’Reilly, 2005). Without teachers’ guidance on the out-of-class writing,
students were brought to the blog environment in which they posted their articles, made correc-
tions or gave suggestions and shared their work with others.Thus, students could have greater
inspiration to write and gain more practice in writing.
Richardson (2006) also pointed out some advantages of using blogs in education, such as how
blogs can erase the limitation of classroom walls and offers students more possibilities to connect
with others outside of the classroom. Teachers and students can manage and reflect upon their
learning outcomes through the archived data on the blogs (Chuang, 2008; Liu & Chang, 2010).
Blogs encourage students to be more actively engaged in knowledge creation, sharing their ideas
and viewpoints in writing with others and publishing their works (Krishnamurthy, 2002; Rich-
ardson, 2006). According to Flower and Hayes (1981), the act of writing involves three major
elements.These include: the writer’s long-term memory, task environment and the actual writing
process. These written documents on the blogs have a vast audience in the blogosphere because
they can be easily shared with others on the Internet. Such learning experiences vastly differ from
those in the past.
From the literature review, many studies show the possible relationship between blogging
and writing (Liu & Chang, 2010) and peer feedback and performance (Liu & Lin, 2007).
However, there are insufficient studies investigating the effectiveness of using peer feedback
to improve elementary students’ writing through blogging; this study aimed to remedy that
issue.
Method
This research adopted a single-group with pre- and post-tests design to investigate the
effectiveness of using peer feedback to enhance elementary students’ writing through blogging.
The experiment was conducted for 2 hours per week over a period of 15 weeks. An online
platform of blogging, named ‘uSchool’, was provided to the participants for posting their written
works. A series of quantitative and qualitative techniques were employed to analyse the data,
including interrater reliability, content analysis, t-test, analysis of covariance, observations and
interviews.
British Journal of Educational Technology Vol 42 No 1 2011 E1–E4
doi:10.1111/j.1467-8535.2010.01139.x
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