DOI: 10.21276/sjahss.2016.4.9.2
Available Online: http://saspjournals.com/sjahss 992
Scholars Journal of Arts, Humanities and Social Sciences ISSN 2347-5374 (Online)
Sch. J. Arts Humanit. Soc. Sci. 2016; 4(9A):992-1000 ISSN 2347-9493 (Print)
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Sentence Fragmentation in the Writing of Senior Secondary School Students of
Gwale, Kano, Nigeria
Ibrahim Bashir, Normah Binti Yusof, Nasiru Ahmad Sadiq, Sharifah Nor Madiah binti Syed Omar
Centre of English Language Studies, Faculty of Languages and Communication, Universiti Sultan Zainal Abidin,
Malaysia
*Corresponding Author:
Ibrahim Bashir
Email: bashelkalil@yahoo.ca
Abstract: It is conventionally agreed that the effectiveness of written English depends on the grammatical correctness.
This study empirically investigated the sentence fragments from the compositions of senior secondary students. It aimed
to identify fragments, its frequency and to explore on what causes the fragments. The study employed a mixed method
approach in which an embedded design was adopted to guide the collection and analysis of the data. The subjects of the
study comprised 30 students purposively selected from secondary schools of Gwale Local Government Area, Kano
Nigeria. Achievement Test is used to collect the data. Markin software version 4.222 is used to speed up the process of
data analysis. The result of the study revealed that sentence fragments ware frequently found in the participants
compositions. Meanwhile, the main causes of fragments were attributed to intra-lingual sources. The study will help
teachers to gain insight into the persistent difficulties students are facing in their writing.
Keywords: Sentence Fragment, Error Analysis, ESL, Written Language, Grammar.
INTRODUCTION
The attainment of accuracy and competency in
writing is not an easy task to master, due to its intricate
and complex nature that requires rigorous practices that
can be learned explicitly through experiences. It is
crucial for students, especially L2 learners to learn how
to write accurately, especially for academic purposes.
The status of English in Nigeria cannot be
underestimated; as the official language as well as the
language of instruction used at almost all phases of
education: primary, secondary and tertiary institution.
Thus, it is the second language and the lingua franca of
the nation. Despite the pivotal roles played by English
in Nigeria, there is still a regression in the standard of
education and the falling standard of education becomes
apparent in the students‟ performances in their final
examination of “Ordinary level” at senior secondary
school phase of education. In fact, most of the students
are failing to score 5 credits in the major subjects
including English and mathematics in either WAEC or
NECO- as it‟s required for them to get admission into
the universities.
The mass failure of students in the final
examination and lack of competence in the English
language aroused a lot of frustrations among students
and teachers. Moreover, the incompetency in the
English language leads to a limitation in students'
understanding and ability to grasp curriculum content
which impacts overall academic achievement of the
students [1]. Therefore, students are required to have a
good mastery of English writing skills to pass at credit
level in West African Examination Council (WAEC)
and National Examination council (NECO) as well as
terminal Examinations. To stress on the issue, WAEC
and NECO annual reports –„2004‟ to „2013‟- [2] show a
consistent decline of students‟ performance as
exemplified in the various errors found in their written
compositions. As a result, the students‟ essay writing
skill continually falls below expectations [3]. The chief
examiner for May/June WAEC 2007 [4] reported that
the poor performance of students in The English
language is as a result of deficiencies in weakness in
skills of writing, construction of loose sentences,
transliteration from the mother tongue and abuse of the
basic rules of grammar. In point of fact, Akinwamide
[5] asserts that Most of the complaints about poor
performance of students in SSCE are as a result of
students‟ poor writing skills [6] and [7].
The problem of sentence fragment is not given
much attention in previous research viewed in the
literature, as it covers only part of the different errors
analysed in one research. This gives the present study a
very practical objective to be conducted. The general
objective of this study is to find out the level of
students‟ composing competence in written English
during their last year of senior secondary school phase.
It sought to achieve two fold of objectives: first, is to